I successfully riled a bunch of people up with a few statements on facebook. (Insert mood: highly amused here.)
Statement 1: People tell me I have cliffhangers in my books all the time. (Manner of Riling: these people aren’t fans? Author Statement: They can be fans and hold this opinion. Doesn’t mean I AGREE with them, but they can have their opinions on this matter.)
Statement 2: Tongue-in-Cheek “Well if people are going to tell me I leave cliffhangers, maybe I should do an ACTUAL cliffhanger for a change…” (Because seriously, if people tell me I wear these shoes, why not ACTUALLY wear them?)
Cue the end of the internet.
So, the white elephant in the room is as follows: if I want to write a cliffhanger, I absolutely will, because *I* am the one investing 300+ hours of my life to write, edit, and produce the book… if I feel a book needs a cliffhanger ending, I am absolutely going to do so.
Second: I am generally a “happily for now” or “happily ever after” author. This means one thing and one thing only for me: at the end of the book, you know where the main character is, and they are in a decent space. They aren’t necessarily sunshine and rainbows, but you know where they are, and they have the promise of good things to come for them.
That’s it, that’s all.
I generally leave the love interests alone, because I don’t like reading the books that don’t leave the love interests alone at the end of the book.
I do not write tragedies. If I were to write a tragedy, I would not announce that it is my pen name, I would quietly publish it, and none of you would have any idea I was writing a tragedy unless you happen to enjoy tragedies and read it.
Yes, there are circumstances where I simply will not tell my fanbase I’m writing a book, and that is in the case of a tragedy.
Note: tragedies are, to me, defined by major character deaths at the end of the book and darkness and gloom abounding. They’re the kind of book that makes you cry at the end, and there’s nothing happy about it at all.
Please do not mistake “cliffhanger” or “tragedy”, and I feel a bunch of you have failed to distinguish the difference between a cliffhanger and a tragedy.
Furthermore, I do not at all feel like “pointing readers in the direction of the next book’s arc” is a cliffhanger. Look, giving people a reason to pick up the next book is hugely critical for making a series succeed. The lack of this in the Magical Romantic Comedy (with a body count) series is why it is dying and soon to be dead.
Take your time to think about it. There’s just NOTHING suggesting the reader should move to the next book. 99.9% of things are tied off in a neat little bow. There’s no overarching immediate plot problem to be solved. (And no, avoiding the End of Days simply doesn’t count for this purpose. It is not driving readers from continuing from one book to another.)
Cover your eyes if you can’t handle minor spoilers:
Lilith Daniels and GP Robbins both use “open arcs” to drive readers from book one to book two. There is a significant arc left open that will not be answered in book one. This has hugely helped both book twos show every sign of doing well now that they are up for preorder (or soon to publish.)
If Lilith Daniels has a 50% increase of her preorders between book one and book two (Example: 1,000 preorders for book one, 1,500 preorders for book two) then I will put in serious thought into opening an arc to continue the storyline. Essentially, I have two endings in my head for how Grave Intentions can go. If there is sufficient interest in Grave Intentions, then I will use the one ending I have in mind. If there isn’t, well, I close off everything, tie it off with a pretty little bow, even close up a bunch of the little things from book one that might have become a spinoff, and let it go to the grave with pretty flowers and a nice ceremony.
I could change my mind and open a new book after the fact, but the reality is… I can tell the story I wanted to tell in two books. Would I like to do more in that world? Yes. But I will be equally happy walking away after two books.
I’ve been told numerous times that Grave Affairs ended in a rather significant cliffhanger. (Naaaah, looool) I do not agree with these readers, and frankly, I disregard their commentary as a general rule.
And I recommend they don’t read my books if that level of “cliffhanger” bothers them.
Please stop thinking “I want to read to read the next book because there’s something interesting on the horizon” is a “cliffhanger.”
It’s really not.
A cliffhanger would be “The love interest of the book does something dangerous and the main character does not know their fate.”
A lead-in is “the love interest and the main character have made the decision to do this something dangerous, and they will be leaving in the next ten minutes.”
You know something dangerous is coming… but the characters are safe for the moment.
Cliffhangers are as the name implies: somebody is hanging off a cliff by their fingertips, and you do not know if they are dead, alive, or other.
But here’s the deal, y’all…
Authors are not responsible for your triggers.
We aren’t responsible if you can’t handle cliffhangers. We are under ZERO obligation to spoil the ending of a book to make you comfortable. And yes, saying a book has a cliffhanger is a HUGE spoiler. You have literally told readers how a book ends…
That completely ruins the reading experience for many people.
Authors cannot know, guess, or even worry about how every single reader will react to something… and it isn’t our responsibility to list triggers, warnings, etc. Every rare now and then, I will put a “Reader discretion is advised” label on a book. This is a courtesy, and it is not ever a requirement.
You are responsible for your emotional and mental health, you are responsible for your triggers, and it is never the responsibility of others to maintain control over you triggers, emotional, or mental health.
Do I care about my readers? Absolutely. That’s part of why I have a few personal rules I follow when I write a book.
Happily for now or happily ever after is one of those rules. But anything else goes… and yes, that includes cliffhangers.
If you cannot handle the responsibility of managing your personal triggers, please do not read my Lilith Daniels or G.P. Robbins titles. These are not comedies despite funny things happening in them. They are darker works with villains who have done reprehensible things.
Your triggers are not my responsibility. NO author is responsible for your triggers.
When I write a book, I am doing so trying to tell the best story possible. If I catered to every reader trigger, every reader preference, every reader complaint, every reader desire… I would have a pretty garbage book.
Yes, my comment on facebook was amused and tongue in cheek, but it serves as a reminder for everyone of these things.
I am not responsible for you.
That includes your likes, your dislikes, your triggers, your personal traumas, your interests, and your personal preferences and opinions on anything in this life (or the next.)
If you can’t handle cliffhangers, I recommend that you stick strictly to my Bernadette Franklin books. They are, at the heart and soul of them, happy romances usually without much in the way of a direct villain and is about people finding and falling in love with each other.
Everything else? It’s not my problem if you can’t handle the material. (Seriously, it’s not. ALL of my stories have dark tendencies EXCEPT the Bernadette Franklin books… and if you haven’t noticed this, you have missed the point of many of the books.)
I write what I love to read… and sometimes, that is going to make people uncomfortable.
And that is not my responsibility. Sorry, but it’s not.
I write happily ever after and happily for now books because that is what makes me happy… but that doesn’t mean every single character is happy for ever or for now… or will even survive to the end of the series.
They just tend to more often than not, as I generally like keeping my characters alive. Living characters provide more plot options. If I am killing off a good guy, there is a damned good reason for that death.
That’s just how I roll.
And yeah, if I ever did decide to write a tragedy… you simply wouldn’t know. Not even on Patreon. (Although Patreon subscribers would be aware that there is a tragedy out there somewhere. And no, I would not tell them or share the book, because the whole point is to be fully separate.)
My reader base is generally escaping tragedy. But seriously, stop overlapping tragedy and cliffhangers. Those are two VERY different things…
A cliffhanger means you don’t know.
A tragedy means you know… and it didn’t end well.
But please, please, please check yourself at the door when it comes to books.
An author is never ever responsible for your triggers.
If we were… we would have to stop writing books, because there is zero chance of making everybody happy or comfortable.
Wendy S.
Having a good reason to buy the next book is always a good thing! Case in point: Declan.
The Sneaky Kitty Critic
I’m eyeballing December 2025 for that if beginning of 2025 goes well on the drafting front.
Rondalea
Good for you, sorry that responding to some ding-a-lings took time away from your fabulous writing. Your worlds that you build and report on…are amazeballs. You are an amazing author. I enjoy everything you write. The only ones not for me, are by Bernadette Franklin. But, I understand that I don’t enjoy them due to my personal preferences at this time. Keep on being you and hang in there.
Side note, I actually liked Barbara Cartland books from age 11 to 15, I know, yikes.
The Sneaky Kitty Critic
Yep, Bernadette Franklin books have like literally zero edges anywhere in them for the most part. I get that. Those are the books I write when *I* need a soft, warm hug.
Xander
People seriously called the ending of Grave Affairs a cliffhanger? You keep using that word, I do not think you know what it means, lol.
The Sneaky Kitty Critic
Yeeeep! I giggle every time, too. I mean, technically, there are characters who are in trouble somewhere, possibly… maybe. There COULD be a cliffhanger there… but yeah. Grave Affairs is “abruptly ended” or has “a cliffhanger” depending on who you ask. Note: this is not everybody. This is just the feedback I’ve heard about the book looool.
Michele
Cliffhangers, story arc hooking me in to the next book, engaging my interest in continuing to purchase your books, it’s all good for me. I so appreciate the hours authors have to spend to share their words with the world. Some of them draw me in, others repel me. Nevertheless I still appreciate and respect that they’ve put a lot of themselves out there. I can definitely say that your work keeps me preordering! Plus if you wrote a tragedy I’d want to read it, because I love the way you write.
Phyl
I have enjoyed all the Magical Comedies so far & re-read as well.
Keep on being you. Do what makes you feel good.
Ignore the doomsday naysayers who just like to pick at things to make themselves feel good.
I love your sense of humour (& sarcasm).
Keep on writing what is important to you & look after yourself.
Phyl
Robert D Kelly
YES to all of the above.
Keep on doing what you are doing, lady.
Margaret Matkey
I agree with you 100%. I don’t feel that you are writing your books to my criteria and I wouldn’t want you to. It’s your imagination that I read your books for, not mine. If I don’t particularly like a book then I won’t continue a series. I am one of those people who like happy endings but I don’t expect all books to have them. I very much enjoy your books and I just tend to like your books under the pen names I read. If I don’t care for the style of one of your pen names then I just read the ones I do like. Simple, simple.
The Sneaky Kitty Critic
Yep, the pen names exist *exactly* for this reason. You can test out a pen name, see if the vibe is right, and if so, you have a new author to play with! If not, you avoid, and everyone is happy!
Pen Names so help me escape from my own head, too. Need just pure fluffy happiness? I work on a Bernadette. I want dark procedural? I hit up GP. Want draaaaggoonnss and kittens? I visit Lilith.
The vibes are as much for me as it is for readers!
Shirley
Please keep GP and Lilith arc going! I want to live in both these worlds for as long as possible! Yes you have different pen names, but there is a core You through the pantheon. And that’s what we come to enjoy. Your world building, complexity and philosophical needle-threading: every bit of it! So glad for these new directions and the original series stand up to rereads happily. Thank you!
The Sneaky Kitty Critic
I mean, yes, I wrote all the books. There BETTER be a core me throughout lolololol! otherwise, I’d be very very worried! Heh
Nina M Hutchins
You should write what you wish. An author must be true to themselves. If the readers can’t understand that’s their problem.
I love all that I’ve read od your work.
brian busby
I personally think these people are so rude , actually having the Gaul to criticise someone for the hard work they put in.
I would hate to be their partner if they actually have one.
I wonder if at work they go into the bosses office and openly have a go at them !
Do you also think they derive pleasure from these acts. Trying to harm others is not nice.
I know it’s hard to ignore them but it will only take a toll if you let them get you down.
Keep up the brilliant work.
ATB
Brian
Judith
I hope that you are taking care of yourself. Be kind to yourself
Christopher Stott
Always a pleasure to read your posts as they are enlightening regarding an industry which provides so much pleasure but we know little about. Your books have brought me many hours of quiet enjoyment whilst sitting outside, watching and listening to the birdlife. Thank you.
Eileen Stevens
I love that you stick to your guns. You do you, that is why we love your books. I am one of the people who pre-orders everything so I don’t miss out. I don’t do this for many authors. Please do what you do best – give us books we can’t wait to read. 😁
Su Tatreaux
“An author is never ever responsible for your triggers.” Thank you for posting this. I had someone on FB once tell me that an image I put in my profile (of Lady Liberty gagged) was triggering to them and thus they were blocking me for a while. Well, OK then.